All Comments on 'Spur of the Moment'

What a great description of experienced and inexperienced connecting in a developing relationship. The awakening and recognition from Jennifer was satisfying and fun. Maggie’s adult development may come in a later chapter? Nicely done. Thank you.

Looking forward to more very good so far !!!

I like the story overall, but, all the groaning really didn't make sense. Made the character (Jennifer) seem off and was distracting. I understand she's shy, but it just didn't resonate with me. Keep writing, you've got some great ideas.

I liked the story quite a bit but all the unnecessary groaning was distracting.

Very good story line and well told