All Comments on 'Spy V Spy'

Very good but wrong category? 4 stars for the story.

good wind up with characters developing but suddenly a fast and simplistic ending, This could have been so much better.

Clever little story!

5

It is always good to have a new story from Matt. Well done and 5 stars from me.

Why was this in LW?

I was wondering what category, but I reasoned that as the spy was bonking the wife, I'd place it in my favourite category. Loving Wives.

5 stars short but very good and to the point write another one like this please

"How's it going, Tommy?" - "Tommy?" I thought Miles was talking to Paul?

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"Not very sensible to use a false address associated with your German family" - How was that address associated with his German family?

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Definitely kind of petered out at the end, with everything tied up in a neat bow,

interesting story but no emotion, no real drama

Enjoyed the story, but what is it doing in LV?

Loved the story - fresh comes to mind in this genre - 5*

Well done. Reads like a shorter & different version of the Netflix movie, "City of Angels"

Good and entertaining.

I love detective stories.

But I do feel it is iin a wrong category

though it does have the element of a cheating spouse.

Missed opportunity for a really good story. Loved the concept, liked the MC -- but there could have a lot more intrigue, etc.. in this story. Lots of Plot mechanisms to find the culprit easily. Way to quick an end. 4* for a good tale, but could have been so much more.

Good story.

Nice story. Cymru

Short but straight to the heart of your story

Nice short spy story, Matt. 5*

Not sure how it can be both short and a bit tedious, but that how it felt.

Very disappointing effort from a very good writer.

Short and direct. Great story! 5*

I liked it, though it did feel a big slow, but nonetheless it wasnt bad.

I do have to admit I saw the UK part of your name and thought "Wow, we;ll be getting that rare as a unicorn, cuck story".

But we didnt so that earned you an extra star.

Well-done, Matt. 5*.

Hooked

I love the title, Mr. Black. Did you channel a bit of Mad Magazine's famous comic there? Thanks for posting, Randi.

Good one with a decent wrap up. Thought with all the Walthers and Lugers floating around that there might be a little gun play though.

Short and well done! Thanks, Matt. I enjoyed it and gave you 5.

All i can say is, "disappointing."

Very difficult to wade through this. The third paragraph finally had 2 sentences! The opening sentence needed shortening to qualify as a run-on... The entire effort seemed more stream-of-conscience than cohesive story. Even after several readings, the first sentence of the second-to-last paragraph eluded understanding.

Good little tale that one Matt. Thank you

I liked it.

It had class.

Historic class.

And some fine writing.

The only thing bad about it,

was it being short.

Thanks for an entertaining story Matt.

4 out of 5 from me.

Nice story. A jolly good read. Thank you. 5 stars, no question.

Cagivagurl

Seemed a little distant and unemotional: no characters a reader could get involved with, unlike your usual. Sorry, could only give it 3*.

A nice little noir spy story. Thank you.

5/5

loving wives? really?

Well done and thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks

Not really a Loving Wife story. Short and concise but rather routine in the narrative. Rated just a 3 as average.

*****Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.