All Comments on 'Spying on my Parents' Sexy Neighbor Pt. 03'

Very good but more fucking mum

You are amazing. I have enjoyed all that you have written and was pleased with all. There is one thing I’d like to point out. Please get someone to read them before posting. A few things could need word correction but overall I wanna see the next item you write. THANKS

Take this as gentle criticism

I’m going to make you one of my favorite authors

Excellent, a little longer even but keep it going!

Very good. I see others are mentioning your spelling and what not. They are valid points.

Your writing and story telling is on point, but your grammar and spelling could use work. I'm no expert myself, but I spend a lot of time on editing before I post. My email addy is in my profile if you want to chat. 5 stars

SUPER HOT LOVED EVERY WORD

Dam I would love to read about how it goes at next party and who they find as a girl friend for him.

It got more serious than earlier tales.Very nice but proofreading and paying attention to tense would be very useful as well!

Will you continue adding onto your stories please?

Excellent Series, 5 stars on each chapter/part. Ditto on what nyterambler said, but would also like to see him hook up with his older sister, and since you mentioned an Aunt Beth, maybe her too.