All Comments on 'Squire Trelawney Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 13 years ago

I like

this story,it is completely different from any other on this site.I must confess that I never thought that Squire Trelawney(one of the heros of Treasure Island) would act like this!

GrumpyGamby over 13 years ago

Highly Enjoyable Story

Celia and Trelawney are adorable characters and I would enjoy reading more about them. But I can't see where else this could go. However, you're the author. So if you've got someplace to take them, by all means...

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

MORE!

A dee dee em oh are ee! This story was so good!

Anonymousover 11 years ago

more please?

very good, please continue, i have enjoyed it greatly

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Yes, more pleasee!!!

This is an authentic story, not your usual domant Master-poor innocent virgin teen type of biring stuff, loved how Celia's innocence sets fire in the old man-btw 43 is not old at all, hopefully squire John Will feel younger after each time with Celia...

RUSTY16 over 8 years ago

Please continue

A rollicking good story - dust it off and continue please.

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