All Comments on 'St. Agatha's School for Herms'

The stupid policy was merely put there to qualify this for Literotica submission.

Damn shame that it came out lukewarm!

This story is so damn long. Its a mini novel or something! It should be submitted to the contests on here! Your mind is very sick and twisted! That being said... Keep it up! Oh, and can you sneak me into this school?

I wasn't sure about this at the start but it turned out great. Loved the last sex scene. Before this story I didn't like piss drinking and had never contemplated milk. After, I love the piss drinking and don't mind the milk.

Great story. well written. keep up the great work. one suggestion...don't say "this is word for word what ___ said " because no one can remember word for word what was said without a tape recorder...say something like "this is what I remember being said" ...Good job!!!

Not been on the site for a while the best story I have read to date love these kind of stories keep it up

That was both well written and highly erotic with a wonderful sexual charge from start to finish. Keep up the good work, I would definitely love to see another story based at the school, or even continued adventures between the three main girls.

OMG!!!! I loved it so amazing!

I have never thought of dating someone like the characters in this story until now.

Now I actually wouldn't mind finding some one like this, if only to finally have some one who could love me as unconditionally as I would try to love them.

once again a wonderful story, well written, hot sex scenes

ow and sorry if i complained so much about your grammar in the past. have you used an editor by any chance? it helps pretty well if you let him/her read it at least once through

anyway like i said, the story was pretty well written, the excellent quality which we've become used to

though a small remark, i kinda feel like the scene with Quinn and her ice queen and Akhila and her girlfriend could have been a bit longer and in a way they kind of felt rushed. though i can understand, it's already pretty long, but perhaps you could give the 3 girls more action in their individual (and combined) adventures in a sequel?

just a few quick ideas, keep up the good work

ow and you may or may not see some familiar stuff in my stories in the future, it's only stuff i got as inspritation, nothing i write is literally copied and if i'd wanna do that, i'd ask permission first

This story was awesome. I had a raging hardon the whole way through. It was written very well with very few mistakes that I could notice. The only thing I didn't care for was the piss drinking but some people like that I'm sure. I just think it's nasty as it's the body's way of expelling waste. I hope you expand on this and make it into a series. There are endless possibilities. I would suggest focusing on a new girl next time, one who transitions into junior year after the "talk"that they get or whatever, just a suggestion though.

I had to take ten cold showers after reading this.

superb story, very well told and sexy as fuck - more please

Wow, what a fantastic story! Please keep writing!

I really enjoyed all the variations that you packed into this story. You developed a universe with a lot of possibilities and I hope you continue with it.

All the best.

Would be great is you wrote more of this. Such a great story.

Loved it now I want to know where I can find a girl like Akhila

As an RN with a psych background I realize there are many people out there "gifted" with physical characteristics like you mentioned and the mental trauma and loneliness is often devastating. I think that the caring and delicate light you shed on these girls was great, your work was exceptional. Thank you for writing.

just to tell you this is my first time reading your story loved it im a 62 year old she male lo0king to read more so ty leannxxxxxx

Most beautiful, touching and Loving, Wonderful Story I've ever read on any of these pages. Thank You for Sharing. Much Love to You Always, little Johnnie

It was by far the best story I have read on this site. It had so many elements that set it apart from most other stories. It was a tender and loving story. It had me wondering what would happen next. Finally, It was so exciting I found it hard to read unless I was in private. I hope that you will write a sequel and I promise to read some of your other stories. Keep up the good work. Steve

your writing and imagination is so amazing!

writing about herms/shemales, shemales fucking their teacher, eating each other out, drinking breastmilk, drinking piss, eating cum! i imagine these things just to get off,and get a good squirt of cum each nite!

i'd like to see more of your stories, and if any of these students get each other pregnant, have kids, teach them lovemaking,incest, ect.

sure would like to see if there is such a school!

great story but end is like a cliff hanger making me want to see the real end to the story when the main person graduates

Can there be a part 2 or something? A sequel would be awesome

I lovd your story but I hope that the will be a part 2.. plesss consider making a part 2 pless.

This is not just exclusive to this story, but as from what I have read, every one of your stories. It especially irritates me as it is so unrealistic and unnatural for someone to say or know right off the bat.

This even applies to your third-person stories.

What I'm referring to is the constant mentioning of weights (and in some cases, heights) when a new character is introduced into a story. This is especially unrealistic when it is from a first-person perspective as NO ONE would say these things and they wouldn't know just telling from a new character's appearances.

(Height's okay in this case as you can probably judge someone's height and it'll give the reader somewhat of an idea of how tall or short a character may be and would fit into context on its own).

I know it's erotica, but come on... be sensible about it, the rest of your work is very top notch quality aside from this constant trend and problem throughout them; I really doubt anyone cares about a character's weight, at all.

P.S.

A Caged Bird Sings Ch. 04 please. <3

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Anon.

Story had me hard. A lot.

calm your fucking tits...its a porn story...about chicks with dicks...get over yourself...and its fiction...why is fiction supposed to be realistic....tell me this

What is so impossible about the height/weight of the characters? I myself am 5ft 7 and weigh only 95lb - some of us are simply small-boned.

Before anyone starts screaming anorexia or extreme dieting - despite my huge appetite and ability to scare waiters I have rarely topped 100lb and only for short periods where I have done an excruciating amount of exercise over a long period (horse-riding as a school subject) and built ridiculous amounts of muscle. As much as I would like to have a pair of store-bought trousers that don't threaten to fall off with the smallest tug, I am naturally thin and no amount food seems to increase my weight (trust me - I've tried!)

While the weight of the characters may not be the social norm where you are don't try to knock a good story because of it - especially as it's FICTION!!!

I loved it!!! My only complaint worth mentioning is that you don't have more chapters. Please write more about this school. You could even expand it into a series of Ahkila being the senior with one or two juniors next school year. Or Ahkila being the new counselor for the school

This story line is well worth expanding, either within the school environment, or following the roommates as they matriculate. While I adore all three of the roommates, Lucretia is the most intriguing. Thanks.

Amazing. Really, really wish you'd written more set in this world. Besides "A Big Side Effect," this story of yours is my favorite.

Really liked the story. Could have ended better though. Gave you a5 but could use a little better editing. Otherwise great as a usual.....

Who cares about the editing. That was the hottest story i have read on this site.

Please keep it going.....wow

Excellent story! Would love to see the angst between Akhila and her lovely drawn out more. Cold knock it up a notch with the oil’ sexy spice weasel.

As erotic as this story is, I don't go for the anal business. I think that you could accomplish all that you have written had all the girls had vaginas and average-size dicks in lieu of the whoppers that have become a cliche on this site. Nevertheless, the story still deserves five stars.

I absolutely Loved this story and wish there was more to read about Akhila and Rachel and Akhila's roommates and if Rachel and Akhila stayed in a relationship during the rest of their school years and afterwards