All Comments on 'Staci's Gramma'

by HappyOldGuy

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Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69almost 5 years ago
G spot

I remember when I was young and feeling that ribbed spongy area and having no idea what it was called. But soon found out that by rubbing it the woman would go nuts! So nice to watch a woman cum when it's properly massaged. Good story!

scipioparkinsscipioparkinsalmost 5 years ago
Nailed it!

Fun, technically well written, stylish and while the end was telegraphed a little, it didn't take anything away from it. Thank you.

blaster666blaster666almost 5 years ago
Awesome story!

Five stars all the way! Thanks for a fantastic read.

linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Funny

What a fun and interesting story, I enjoyed it completely.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

hope you have more of staci's gramma

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Best gravy ever

If I could give this story a ten 10 stars I would darn good story lots of family sex. Loved it good job hope there is more to this story.

HappyOldGuyHappyOldGuyalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your appreciation and comments

This is my 17th publication on Literotica and I thank them for this forum to share upon. It is quite gratifying to have such appreciation and intelligent comments on Staci - so quickly. I'll even accept the "telegraphed the ending" critique, but it's a difficult balance to be obvious enough that everybody "gets" it - without being too obvious for some. As to further adventures for "special gravy", I guess I did leave it pretty open at the end for MeMagleMatt to return to Staci's house. Thanks for the encouragement.

HappyOldGuyHappyOldGuyalmost 5 years agoAuthor
OOOOps

I just noticed that I misspelled Staci's name in the 2nd-to-the-last paragraph. Maybe too much gravy on my mind....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Make a great video

Would love to see a video done of your story.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 5 years ago
Never again

Will I ever have gravy again.

Can just imagine the girls asking if they can have some gravy on my meat.

Had a few chuckles with your story, look forward to more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fountains of Wayne

Kinda cryptic comment, so this may clear it up

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZLfasMPOU4

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