All Comments on 'Stacys Step-Brother'

by SinnersMiss

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sargedog1sargedog1over 1 year ago

Carefully sitting on the edge of "her" bed. Funny she had gone to his room where she walked in on him yanking his "thickness"?? okay I guess it can be used as a noun.

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Can’t believe that she is using him ,, and doesn’t even care for him based on this story,, that’s the way it comes across to me

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

I think you forgot something: something worth reading.

This was boring as hell, and badly written too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think you left out about 5 more chapters. This was only the beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story was fine until you approached the actual part with sex and it ended abruptly in an odd manner. I'd say completely rewrite the ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I don't understand? Where is the video???

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