All Comments on 'Staid Wife to Slut Wife Ch. 04'

Keep on writing

Will Paul ever take her out of town for a weekend? He could take her to the hotel bar dressed in a very short skirt, c-through top, thigh-hi's, 6-inch stiletto heels and nothing else. Gee, I wonder where that might go?

Hi Igcelsie - glad you liked it. I have done a sequel of sorts but under the title 'Hubby's Corporate Fuck Toy'. The first part of this takes me to a hotel where I have to service some more guys. There is also a second part to the story already written that should appear on the site over the next couple of days.

- Nat xx

very good series , enjoyed it immensely. Need more chapters please Nat :) Xx Vaislovechild

Thanks Nat!

Very enjoyable. Building nicely while still being plausible. Keep writing!!

Dan

Hi nat. First of all congratulations on having the courage to share these storys. Please keep writting more chapters. My self and my wife have very similar lifestyle. I

Great story. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

So much scope for future development.

Wish my hubby would take me from staid wife to slut wife.

The consensual domination is fine but to bring in this former neighbour who clearly despises his wife and vice verse is over the top and uncalled for. It’s emotional abuse despite the issue that the wife appears to get off on humiliation.

The it comes across is as him getting protracted revenge for her screwing the guy from the Christmas party.

Other than that it’s a damned good story, I wouldn’t have had an issue with it if it had been a different couple joining in.

AWESOME STORY Line great stories each and every one.,,. Her love for her husband is the key to this story and her willingness to do it !!

It´s a pity that you didn´t write more of her developing. Fiona could have taught her so much more to become a sextoy for those three.

Well written as always and a great insight into how you became the slut you are. Thoroughly enjoyed all four parts but the one criticism I have is that the final part of the story could’ve been drawn out more. There was a lot packed into such a short story, but having read a little of your newer stuff I think that this is something you’ve learned to do very well, as it appears you learn to do most things very well, very quickly

A really dirty bitch but great story. Jonathan14 xx

Enjoyed your story, thought it was well written. My only criticism was husband's selection of "others" to humiliate his wife; his best friend who she has known for long period and then the former neighbor whom wife and she had been friendly competitors. However, the rest of the story was most enjoyable.

Loved the story but having an enemy as her tormentor AND her husband knew that ? Just no... a close friend ok but an enemy is pushing things too far , but sexually great story

The author has a gift for helping the reader feel Nat's humiliation, and lust. We almost feel sorry for her until you realize that she asked for it and is reveling in it. She loves the debasement and degradation. What fun for all involved. Five stars and a favorite.

Not usually up for BDSM, but this started in loving wives and I just sorta followed it over...

It was compelling story telling!

Maybe it's the edibles talking, but I suddenly felt I was reading "Oliver Twist" with Paul voiced by Michael Palin. OOooh: would play Nat?

Ultra erotic

I love Natalie's humiliation and I love that she gets off on it, making for a great read. Shame about the shit-dipping, though but I guess that's inescapable nowadays.

You obviously became bored with your story, starting this chapter with Nat wearing a bra and knickers and instructed to do so again on the following day with expectations of company. The lingerie items are unnecessary barriers and only impede the progress to a house slut's basic purpose of being a repository for sperm. Your less than logical regression earned you only three stars rather than the five your prior three chapters received.