All Comments on 'Stairway to Heaven'

I was enjoying the story until the rather abrupt ending. If it is to be continued it would have been nice if there was some indication at the beginning of the story, much less at the end, that more is to come.

Long, slow (hot) wind-up, fast pitch. It will be difficult for Sweety to be Sub-Wife with Dani meeting Hubby for the first time. Either a 'blind' swap where Dani comes over to Adrian's and Sweety goes to Chuck's for the week-end as their FIRST meeting. OR ... Sweety lets Hubby know she'll be spending the week-end at Chuck and Dani's place! If you're going to have a staircase, might as well be a Tara Plantation staircase as an attic-access pull-down! 4*

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its been working and has succeeded. TK U MLJ LV NV

One of the best I have read so far.

It was a good story but I thought it ended too soon. I'd like to hear about the 3 sum if it's happened yet?

Hot story I'm thinking Ch 02 Is going to be hotter. Thanks for sharing.

Yes, this story seems to be going further than the later ones did. Wonder why it changed later on and focused more on the potential and not the reality

Please. Stop over writing.

Led Zepplin should kick author’s ass for putting their title on this POS.