All Comments on 'Stalking Sis'

Use some imagination and get an editor. The constant use of the present tense drove me up the wall!

good story, but sounded way too much like you just roleplayed it and converted it straight to a story rather than started it as a story from the beginning...and yes, have someone edit your next story

i enjoyed the carrot vs the dick. bringing the story around to sharing where it became "our" instead of his was a nice touch. a well paced story---well done. your characters were very closely matched. after re-reading i believe this is the effect your wrote in.--good job--hetz

good but you never finished you just left us hanging what happened after the parents came home do they find out the kids are fucking do the kids go to college together does she get pregnant since you didn't have them use condoms and didn't mention birth control pills it would have go a 100 if it had been finished but as is it only gets a 50 and thats being kind normally i would give an unfinished story a 25

you are a typical ignorant writer for this site you can't finish what you start and think you have the right to delete comments you don't like well think again all comments are protected by internet copyright law and changing or deleteing them is a felony and carries fines and jail time so if you don't like bad comments don't post stories or do them right and make sure they are complete

DBRS

Who the hell is DBRS?

I see this person write comments all the time and kind annoyed now. If you want to be heard then please by all means say what you want. But really? Jail for deleting a comment? That's new fact to my hears. I can see it now. Two people in cell one killed a person. This person ask what the other one is in for. He says because I deleted comment I didn't like so I got jail time. Lol stop writing stupid comments. Not everyone likes negative remarks. Do you like them. Probably not.

Every submission by any author has a 'moderate comments' button in it's author panel. Click on that and you get the following instruction from Literotica. "As the author of this submission, you are responsible for moderating the public comment board. That means you can delete any comment for any reason. If anyone posts a URL or email address in any comment, please remove that comment immediatly. It is possible that if you delete too many comments, you may discourage people from leaving more comments, but it is your right to moderate the comments on your work however you want. Please see the FAQ area if you have questions."

I post this as information for anyone else who thinks deletion is criminal! Personally I think some of the comments are criminal, but that's beside the point.

An Author.

PS, I've remained anonymous to avoid retaliatory comments on my own stories, that I would then have to go through and delete!

If an author deletes comments [other ,obscene or personal attacks, or the "Incest is sick!" comments from someone who is reading incest stories], just quit reading their submissions. I know, you'd like to give feedback, because that's how authors improve their work, but if an author deletes all the negative comments, then they don't want feedback, they want praise, and they won't improve that way; indeed, they'll get worse, because no author is good all the time, and even the best has stories that only they like. So just quit reading that writer; you won't waste your time, and if enough people quit reading, he [she?] will have no readers.

This is true love. Keep them together. Virginity is sacred, and they have given each other theirs.

This is not erotica.

rubbish. written by a 16 yo?