All Comments on 'Stall Him'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice

Not really much to say except nice! Jack is an idiot and I suspect Martin will find more opportunities to be stalled again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Stupid story; stupid plot.

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 5 years ago
Attempting to deceive and immure an alpha with the inane led to the narrator being immersed in the profane

. Just a bit of Quid Pro Quo between friends. Items of precision , value and beauty being mutually covertly co-opted for an intense but finite interval by mutual acquaintances.

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
WHO IS DOING WHAT WITH WHOM

and which pairs belong together, TK U MLJ LV NV

ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 5 years ago
Well, Jack did tell her to stall Martin!

So, she accomplished her mission. 👍🏻

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Apparently the author hasn't heard about #Me too

Not so nice... This pretty much is a story about a rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Why is she blaming Jack?

She should be thanking him instead. My guess is once she begins to rethink the whole thing, Jack is going to get royally screwed that night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
"It's up to you"?

Any woman I know kicks him in the balls. This was barely a story. More like some opening paragraph. Her husband will be lucky if she doesn't file rape charges on the one hand and pimp and pandering charges on the other. Really a worthless story.

1 star

timrivtimrivover 5 years ago

Chapter 2, the pregnancy.

Two weeks later after Martin had left wifey starts have morning sickness, tests herself finds she is pregnant and most likely it is Martins.

Finds later at the doctor she is having twins.

Doesn’t tell her husband it might be Martins.

When kids are born one is blind blue eyed like her husband the other is chocolate grown like Martin

DNA testing finds one child Martins the other her husbands.

When hubby freaks she tells her husband “well you wanted me to stall him, now you can tell him he’s a dad too.”

imhaplessimhaplessover 5 years ago
Cute

and I distinctly remember that Jack put NO conditions on how she should stall Martin. 5* and a smile.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Rape

Ashton likes to push his rape fantasies in every story, without fail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is the stuff right here

5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Best Part.....

The reference to the Rockwell Automation Turbo Encabulator.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
We need less stories like this.

1 star.

JackallsJackallsover 5 years ago
Poor story, don’t read it.

A waste of time to read this story. Have read other stories by this author, but this one is the poorest I’ve read. I gave it 1 star but even that is too much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
And 26thNC likes to be a dick at every opportunity.

It must really suck to be one of the lamest people on the Internet. Once a pathetic loser, always a pathetic loser.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice to see wives enjoying sex outside of marriage getting good ratings now

Until recently, stories like this would be under 3 stars. You get 5 from me. Keep them cumming.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Hey

It’s 2021, and I’m still the lamest loser, and you’re still an anonymous asshole. Who is the loser?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

you know real events like this happen all the time... Only the individuals know...

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