All Comments on 'Stand for Love Ch. 17'

I enjoyed your story. I just couldnt believe you went on male prenancy route. :)

I absolutely love Adrian ... Thank god Victoria and the host form hell got what was coming to them ! ! ! Drake turned out to be a goodie, all the talking Adrian did I'm not surprised it made him think.

The babies made me think of the Arnold Schwarzenegger ... I loved the whole scene with the pregnancy.

Pleaase write again soon this was Absolutely F****** wonderful ... Thank you x

From now on i'll crown you as THE KING OF WRITERS

vanalas,for sure to tell u u're the best is like minimising ur class,but just know...You did it,i'l pray to God that he gives the power to rule this site

AM SOOO HAPPY to tell u,that......

STAND FOR LOVE HAS FINALLY RULED MY CHART WITH 120% congrats,after F.Y's long rule,that was the plan i wanted.making my protagonist have children

we gays can produce better health kids than straights

i know am gona get hurt after realising that u wont be posting S.F.L again but i dont care,i just wana shower my love for yo stories to u NOW

I loved how Drake changed and oh,he saved my Adrian

the way Adrian moved to the crowd unexpectedly,.Ohhhh how may poor Nick reacted,I LOVE THESE GUYS

mm-hmmm,how hahahahahahahahahahahahaha,,jake and,hahaha victoria and the collegues suffered,u know i thought Adrian was and all next was asuprise..Btw its ur nature vanalas..SO TRICKY

Wonderful!!!!! Vanalas, I really love this and I am so excited and wow..... I love you and your stories..... PS. Don't keep us waiting, we are cheering you on 😘🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

really love your writing keep it up cant wait for the next one

You have made me a forever fan to your work. I loved it n waiting for more. Thank you

page 1-4;breathe again by toni braxton

page 5-13;breathless by shayne ward

diamonds by rihanna

my love-westlife[page 1-4]

no air-jordin sparks an chris brown;page 6

page 8-13,still the one by shania twain and drunk in love by beyonce

i remember in the first chapter,the slap nick recieved from Adrian during shopping

their meetings in Nick's office

their first kiss in the office,do u remember???

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us

How nick saved Adrian from death,in chapter 2..cant believe am gona miss that

how they were in the office,the I LOVE U scene..the hospital scene

how Nick dropped jake on the wedding day and ended up marrying Adrian..Oooh

How granny blessed Adrian..The first day in the house

ooooooh,the first love making scene in ch.3,was it????may be ch.3

honey moon special,,,the love making scenes..the blushing from Adrian..That crazy guy Nick and his horny nature

how Adrian pleasure nick with his hands...I..I..I cant talk more,am gona miss them

ohhh,those beautiful little babies who look exactly like Adrianicks.Hahahaha am gona miss them

their moans when making love,george's love with john..The straight couple of Noah and clara

how Adrian ended the game of those fucking culprits..hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha the looks on their faces in prison hahHaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAAAAAA,,Oh God,am happy

YOU'RE AMAZING VANALAS..AND I KNOW AM YOUR BIGGEST FAN,even if there ar ur favourite readers,plz atleast kno that we yo fans love u SO MUCH

thats all i have for stand for love/S.F.L

GUYS,JOIN ME AND WE CROWN VANALAS,THE KING WRITER OF THE CENTURIES

tok to us,say hi

atleast that will keep us strong til u post again,please

Hello fans and readers. Thank you so much for your great love. I really love you guys a lot, more than live. Thank you so much and watch out for the royal story which I have already started writing. Chapter one will be posted this week. I love you so much.

And jonsravictor, thank you so much. I love you.

the fierce pauper meets aplayboy prince,

I know the next story wil be interesting becoz it will come from THE KING OF WRITERS

I cant wait,post soon my lovely vanalas

i'l always love U

MY DISH OF LOVE

Oh vanalas,thanks for that message,i didnt read it since i was writing acomment

i am really happy,thanks my sweetheart..this really means alot to me

waiting

You write well even if you prolong this chapter a little too much.For excample you use allmost 2 Lit pages to describe Adrian's surface feelings for his mother -in-low when she starts to see that her "game" is over.You probably need the help of a new editor for that. The last days I read all your stories and all of them have the same pattern: Rich gay falls in love with a poor guy,rich gays mother dislike him and plots to separate them.She succeed and poor guy leaves, returning about 5 years later when by a magical way has became very rich and plots to revenge his enemies and wins his lover back.You do write well, but perhaps you could explore some fresh storylines.There are endless possibilitiees, limited only by your imagination.So, mayby you could breath some life into what's became.essentially, varietions on the same first story.

nice

Oh dear,post plz

oh vanalas,please

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all your stories you've written thus far. Its really amazing. All your stories have messages and valuable lessons to be learnt. Also ive read all your stories more than 3 times already and wil continue to do so. Just 1 complaint I have please don't take very long to write or send through the next chapter of your stories. I wait in anticipation for the next chapter to come out. You're biggest fan all the way in South Africa. Much love to you. God bless and please carry on writing amazing stories. Mwahzzzzzzzz.

this is the first story I have read, that you wrote. What a great plot and your characters were wonderful. I think as an Englishman that this is not your first language. I apologise if I am wrong. If you want a Beta reader I would be happy to oblige. This story was great and I loved it.

Thank you

simonjessex@hotmail.com

Just dam*n

Hooooootttt

Manly squeal

Getting ready to check out your other stories!

There is a saying that goes: "those who can't do, teach; ...or play, coach!"

A reader can be very critical, not because he/she can do a better job, but because a reader feels the soul of the story and tries to identify with its characters. There is an expected bond with the writer, and that connection matters.

All this, to tell you, I am not qualified to be a critical writer, nor a reader.

With that said, your writing, tough quite unusual, tells stories that feed the soul of a reader, satisfyingly.

I have read books writing by reknown scholars, that did'nt bring that much interest.

I love reading your works. This is the second time, I binge read a story writing by you.

It's not a style of writing, you are a story teller, and you bring your audience to pay attention to you, wanting to know how it ends.

I think, that's what matters, the story, not the literary style.

People remembers with much fondeness and joy, stories told by parents, and grand parents, or upbringers, when they were little.

I have no advices to give, but to keep telling us your stories, they are truly enjoyable.

I know I do enjoy reading them.

There is one thing though that I wish, you would expend on, I love versatility in gay relationship. "Adrián, Praveen/Travis, George/Eric," could these characters be more versatiles, better endowed, and "Nicholas, Antonio, Sergio, Henry," be more receptived, submisive!!

It would be very appreciated, if in future stories, the couples in your plots would not be a gay version of an hetero normative couple, a strong masculine type (Nicholas, Antonio, Sergio, Henry) well endowed, who is always the top, and a somewhat more submisive type, (Praveen, Eric, Adrian), with a diminutive endowment, who always bottomed. Let them flip and flop, be more versatile.

I love the facts, that Nicholas, George 1and Noah, have a softer and vulnerable side, also how Eric, Travis and Adrian can be very assertive and realy strong.

Please consider, I don't think I am alone wishing this.

Thank you for your stories, and God bless.

PS. I love Drake's redemption, I was hoping him to be Adrian's savior, it turned out better than how I was imaginating it.