All Comments on 'Standing Strong Forever'

Super story - very well written. The story was so good that I didn't even notice any spelling or grammar errors if there were any. Please consider a follow up story when they are at college and able to continue their loving relationship. I would hope they figure out a way to be together forever.

This was a very touching and sensual story and it had my attension all the way through, finding it hard to put it down. Will there be further adventures of these two as they head home and back to college together? You do write an awsome story.

Please dont let this be the end of it - find a way to keep these 2 toghether!

Definetly well written and at times touching! Thanks for a great story!!

yes love it. I think the parents should help them with a 2 bedroom apartment, near the campus {mmmmmmmmmm m}to sharel

also, one more stop just a mile from home so they do it again. or let her give him some head on the road,LOL

as other you wrote, GREAT job

I rarely comment on my own entries here, but given the public and especially the private feedback I have received about this particular story, I thought I would note here that a sequel is in the works.

What more can be said? I'm going to read the next part now.

And yet you still don't know the difference between lay and lie.

Is fucking boring. Sorry, no hook, nothing that got me interested. Just fucking horrible. Why are you allowed to publish on here?

Lets see,maybe because the rest of the story is better than the first paragraph,so try to read more than the first three lines!

duh why aint no comments for this story?

near perfect except sibling scared of other people finding out their relationship even as far as 12 hrs drive. they acted like they were kids of US president and every one would know them, if you try to correct this mistake i think u will have to re write whole story.

I love this and the "Return to the Cabinettes". I really want to see them enacting a few more of their fantasies - S&M, get their own place, etc. Please put this story & the sequel together too please so it's easier to know that there's a sequel. I so am I love with this two. *sigh* You wrote these characters so well. I'm glad I found them.

Im not talking just about erotica either. This, from the characters to the plot to the ending and all the fun in between.

tldr ; Best fucking story ive ever read. Mad props.

Truly magnificent would have liked another chapter on how they made a life together and how they dealt with parents as we did.Our relationship is life long but caused a lot of problems and how they dealt with it would have added to this incredible well written story.Society says it's wrong but My and my sisters lifelong commitment to each other is far stronger than any other relationship we have seen in family or friends.They say that children from incest are damaged but we have had two beautiful girls and they were perfect.We got medical help and Doctors told it's not as risky as it's portrayed.My brother reported us to police and we were interviewed under caution but they were happy there was no undue influence and told us to move away where no one knew us and actually wished us well.

i know you haven't written in a while, but this story is very good. one of my favorites. it would be great if you'd write a sequel. please??!! and thanks for the sexy, erotic, loving story.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. It was slow and full of love, a pleasure to read.

The only thing I didn't like was the level of paranoia exhibited by Misty's brother Thom at the campsite. I didn't understand why he was so paranoid about them being loving towards each other when out in public. They were miles from where they lived and very unlikely to ever encounter anyone they knew. Why didn't they just introduce themselves as husband and wife to people at the campsite?

In all your writings I have not seen one this beautiful. As always your technique speaks for itself, I felt the characters come alive as I read. I only wish you had made Thom a little more carefree in his thoughts and actions while they were camping. His paranoia of societies constraints, while really viable, we're a bit excessive. I can't wait to read more of this young couple. Thank you Sir :)

Good story. I hope to read more.

I found this to be too slow and sparse on the erotic things. Despite his sister's willing submission on the drive in, there was no real follow up to it. He was also away to paranoid and uptight about people hearing them. They were over two days drive from home, the paranoia was uncalled for. The writing was good, but ultimately, the payoff was lacking.

As others have noted, Thom's paranoia was unwarranted.

Also the gag and the bite on the breast seemed really out of step with the love story between these siblings. This is not a BDSM story.