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SupportMain420about 6 years agoNice, I liked it!
5 Stars from me, really well edited. Would read again 10/10 :P
loveloverabout 6 years agoInnovative
Will she be discovered? Will they all get it on together? Tune into Part 2
tallblondeMabout 6 years agoI think you meant Herald
This looks to be the beginning of a great story, but this homophone really made me pause.. "Her heavy chest a Harold of things to come ebbed and flowed in anticipation."
Nit picky? yes. But these kind of mistakes separate Great stories from stories with potential.
MrsZyzzxabout 6 years agoAuthor'Harold' just must have slipped through. Sorry all. It is meant to be herald.
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