All Comments on 'Star Struck Ch. 01'

Hey Musikfreak..

Nice to have you back ")

Love it!

And can´t wait for next posting. Somehow I believe that Justin has been kinda set up by his mum and that Chris isn´t so "straight" as Justin thinks...

Sorry to hear we have to wait two years for your incredible writting to happen again. Good luck in what ever youre going to do. ")

nice beginning

glad to see your new writing, more please

cp

Very good start, I will certainly be watching for the next chapters. :) And don't sweat too much over not having an editor. Your story flows really well and the grammatical errors are negligible.

o i like this story very much and i look forward to your next chapters hope fully more than two l o l loving it keep up the great work

o i like this story very much and i look forward to your next chapters hope fully more than two l o l loving it keep up the great work

Thanks for the nice feedback guys. I feel this entire story wasn't my best work and later chaps may reflect that. Perhaps if I had a few more months to mull over it, it would have been good but seeing as I have less than a week left of internet I don't have that luxury. I guess I can say the reason for my hiatus is because I will be serving my nation in the army. :)

As for anything related to the story I will let it unfold and not spoil anything about it. For any of you wondering how many chaps this story will be, it's an unwhelming 6 chaps. Sorry if that dissapointed you but I had a real mental block writing this, maybe due to my limited time frame. But anyway, thanks for the feedback.

Thought it might be the army... Take care;-)

His mom has engineered this whole thing, and that bet is going to come back and bite Justin in the butt.

Nice start to what looks like a great story.

kept my interest. Take care of yourself and thanks for keeping us all safe!!

I agree that Justin's mother set it up and that the bet will be harder than he thinks. I like both men and look forward to reading the rest of it.

Good luck in the army and be safe.

Justin's reluctance to have Chris staying with him is certainly understandable, for more than one reason. You did a really good job setting the scene for this story and giving us an understanding for the characters.