by PunkRAWKtillIDIE
I really liked the lead up to penetration, and the relationship is really good.
However I don't want this story to develop into super fantasy where she gets pregnant from him or anything. I would like to see them get into other relationships while still fucking. It might be super interesting adding some of her friends into it.
Good job!
Great story!! Love the details! I love the fact that it started of as purely coaching then their feelings began to grow & now they are falling for one another. It’s really cute tbh.. I really like where this story is headed, sort of like a fairytale romance. Keep it coming!
For the next parts you could put some obstacles in the way That leave them both torn.. such as them dating other people, tryna be normal, but it doesn’t work out coz they really just want one another but it’s not socially acceptable etc... Or something along the lines of that 🙂
Whatever u decide I’m sure I’ll enjoy it & I can’t wait to read it!!
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Story was full of sexy times and heartfelt at the end. Well done.
Just finished both chapters. Is there going to be another chapter? Really hope so.
The story is at the point where most authors don't know where to take the story. Is it just a sibling sex story that pretty much ends here. Is it going to be a romantic story where the siblings realize they are in love and want to spend their lives together. Or is it a sex story where a parent, friend, stranger off the street gets involved.
For me, I want a loving, romantic sibling story where only the siblings are involved in the relationship, where they accept that they are in love with each other exclusively the sex is just the icing on the cake.
This is a really well written story the dialogue is great and Lydia is a sexy minx the description of the lead up to the anal sex is so good. I'm not especially into anal and keep it in the realm of fantasy but this story describes it really well.
I don't think Ken has taken Lydia's virginity yet so that's possibly the next chapter.
I loved this story and wanted more from these two! You set the hook, now take us to the finish line with these two as a couple!
This story is written out very well, keeping everything realistic while adding all of those feelings in there. Keeping it realistic and painting the picture enough to get a visual is a must for me, and you hit it through the roof. Im intrigued on a part 3, as other comments say as well, romantic seems like the way to go and would make for a great end or continuation.