by MKbuff
I get that this is fanfiction but in my experience fanfiction has a certain amount of realism and this has none of it. It's simply just star wars fucking. I'm sure some people enjoy this but this is just too weird for me.
Iv read a few of ashokas slave storys and this is a really good one. :)
Great job but why didn't ahsoka escape to the gunship by killing the droids surrounding her and jumping onto the gunship instead of surrendering