All Comments on 'Star Wars: Dark Angel Unleashed'

The best I've read coming from the Star Wars Universe... now I know this may be asking a bit much, but perhaps a sequel of some sort, just because it's so good...

Brilliantly written, with a real sense of the SW universe that is so sadly lacking from much of the fiction in that genre. Some great description, excellent dialogue and genuine twists - this story does not go where you expect it to, and is all the better for it. I would love to read about what happens to Lylla on Corusant

I thought your story was very well written and kept mostly true to form with the SW universe. Ive read almost every SW book they've made and i Thought your story was pretty up to par with most. Excellent job, Ill be waiting for a sequel.

I can't believe how well you made your erotic story fit with the normally PG-rated Star Wars universe. The way your story explored a side of Vader we could never expect to see in an official Star Wars work is astounding.

Far better than the Star Wars prequels, anyway. I really hope to see a sequel to this. Much better than many of the novels and written with a great sense of style.

This story left me short of breath - Wltdnfaded has done a wonderful job capturing the essence of Lord Vader. Hoping to see more from this author (and perhaps more of Lylla?).

And best of all, she got off the Death Star before Red Squadron got lucky. This opens up room for a sequel.....

It only took me a minute to see Vader differently from how he is portrayed in the movies because you’d captured my attention from the first page. I’d also enjoyed Lylla. Love her. Any chance of more stories from you about Lylla and/or Lylla and Vader? After all she had been branded as ‘Vader’s’. I hope so!

I’m also disappointed that you only have two stories posted so far. You got to write more and post, please!

Nothing short of outstanding. This story is well filled out. Not just the sex scene but all of the elements of the story were well fleshed out. Perhaps in the future this author could write a novel or at least longer stories. I sincerely hope to see more of this author's work.

It's about freaking time that I found a good Vader fic! Thabnk you!!!!

Brilliantly written story. Hope u win!

I've been in love with Vader for years, but I never figured it out... Absolutely wonderful. Please keep writing!

I'm not an avid fan, but you captured the feeling of the Dark Side of Star Wars. You gave us a new anti-heroine to root for. Thanks.

This has been one of my favorite stories on this site. Now with the "Revenge of the Sith" out, it was even more compelling to read this. Excellent writing. Please write more.

Pure genius! The best Star Wars fic I have ever seen! I was enslaved by your writing from the first words. You have changed my perception of Darth Vader and the Sith - for which I thank you. Perhaps the Dark Side lets us explore the Dark Side of our sexuality too? Write more, I look forward to reading more submissions!

Oh my goodneess. Freakin awesome.

I am a fan of Star Wars, and even though this is an erotic story I could not help but be in tears by the end of it, it captures the essence of the Star Wars universe perfectly, not only that it showed Vader as what he really was: a man.

Many times I've read a story where the characters are little more than stereotypical male or female faces in whatever setting and a quick, shallow sexual romp. This is quite different. You've given both Lylla and Vader a strong depth to their character development, which (IMHO) makes the everything else that much more gratifying. Helps immensely in becoming immersed in the story instead of an indifferent outsider looking in. I look forward to reading more!

I've not read anything nearly as well crafted as this in quite a while. Delicately crafted, the story moved along, and had all of the needed elements for a satisfying read. Thank you for your quality of work.

LOVED IT!!!

You sucked me in and made me feel like I WAS Vader! Gave me a hell of a boner, and I'm 72! Thank you, keep up the good work. (Of course I can see that there are sequels, since I didn't find this until 2017, here's hoping you continue with the series.)