All Comments on 'Starlee's Rent'

keep going - who sent the note - maybe get them and the preacher/wife in also (if they didn't send note)

What fun. Really transcends the norm, and offers endless opportunities for further expansion. The only problem is how to knit all the different sub-plot implications into a coherent series, as the image (for example) of an entire horny congregation group-fornicating under the pews is too tempting to relinquish easily …

Lessons can be learned in every paragraph, and exemplary behaviour in every line!

Cue story line. Oh yeah thrusted is not a word recognized by Mr. Webster. The past tense for thrust is thrust . . . .