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elusiouselusiousover 9 years ago

Poetic- hot- sensual- erotic- dreamlike- and yet real. I love how you've captured this indescribable feeling in your writing. It's amazing. After reading this I'm left feeling.. complete. Thank you. :>

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sensual

This is not porn, this is slow, sensual and truly erotic. Makes a great change.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Oh fuckk...

No_one_knows_meNo_one_knows_meover 8 years ago
Delightfully sensual!

This was so well written. I love the punctuated points; the feelings felt within those special moments. So difficult to put into proper words. But you managed it. Thank you for sharing! x

LiveCatLiveCatabout 8 years ago
Simply beautiful

Amazingly sensual, a joy to read

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I've been a writer since middle school. And since that time I've been published both in print and on the web. I've been honing my skills writing poetry and short stories. I'm always working on a novel of course, but I've just found this new genre - fan fiction. I'm using that...