All Comments on 'Starship Traveler Ch. 01'

This has all sorts of interesting possibilities. Read lots of SiFi over the years. I am 66. Don't recall reading anything like this before. Well done. Please keep at it.

You might enjoy reading works of Edgar Rice Burroughs. From early 1900's. Princess of Mars and other Mars series stories might trigger ideas that you might find helpful in this story.

DMP CA USA

A novel idea and one with many possibilities great work lass.

I've been a science fiction fan for has long as I can remember. I started reading young, so I've now read science fiction for over five decades. I loved the fresh concepts and much appreciate you avoiding the usual "abducted by aliens" cliches. I like how you introduced the various concepts slowly. I look forward to future chapters.

I really enjoyed this well written story, the dialogue between the two characters was so well thought out. Love to read more!

Wishing you continued success with your writing!

I verey much look foward to future instalments well done.

This has to be one of the more interesting stories I have EVER read....ANYWHERE! There is an incredible element of romance in your work and I look forward to future installments of this story. Perchance, have you read any of Jaid Black's books set in the Trek Mi'Quon universe (starting with the Empress's New Clothes)? Your story reminds me of the delightful romantic undertones in that series. You demonstrate great sensitivity with your words and I strongly encourage you to keep up your WONDERFUL efforts.

XXXXX (kisses)

I can't wait to read more about this new species and Revekah's experiences during her travels. I'm sure it will continue in your own fabulous manner.

I was truly delighted to see a new story by you on the site - I was missing your writing since Northwest Hunters concluded.

A very enjoyable first chapter. The dialogue is really engaging each paragraph drew me further into this tale. Emotional exchange between the two feels like the authentic meeting of different cultures / species. The range of emotional expressions captivated me as soon as the exchange of thoughts and feelings began. The tension was subtle when she enquired as to whether she had a choice. Conceptually the idea of someone resigned and welcoming death facing a new life, in a new body is excellent. Little explorations into human humour make the exchanges believable and rounded. There are elements of your description of the non human being that remind me of some of Octavia Butler’s species in Xenogenesis. I look forward to the rest of this story. Thank you

Really enjoyed this story, what a great thought to not worry about anythign, everything recycled and not havig to worry about clothes.

It's a "wonderful beginning" to an

"original concept" that is "interesting

& intriguing" and has "caught my

attention" completely. "I love it" !!

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You’ve managed to make an abduction by a slimy space alien kind of sweet.

I feel a little overwhelmed and curious just like Revekah in the story!

Not really much more than something that struck me funny. You are explaining all this wild tech that is powered by imagination and the best you could come up with is a chamber pot. If the ship is going to manufacture this thing and recycle it at least make a regular toilet or something easier to use and sit on. Otherwise it is a unique story.

chur m8 awsum story

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Looks like I’m late to the dance again lol. Interesting start