Starship Traveler Ch. 01

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"When I need to, um, excrete, could you make me one of those? I could use it and then you could take it away to some other place for the ship to recycle. It would help me a lot if you did that."

"Yes, Revekah, thank you for your willingness to tell me what you need. I did study your culture, but there is a large amount that I did not completely understand. It will help immeasurably if you assist me in understanding what you need to feel comfortable."

Again she ran her hands down the length of her body. "Could I have some clothes?"

"I could make you clothing, but they would not last very long. The ship would start to recycle them in only a short while. Are you cold? I could adjust the temperature."

"No, I am not cold. I am just feeling naked. In my culture naked means vulnerable. It is easier to feel safe and confident if I could have something to wear."

"That would be difficult. My culture does not use inanimate objects. The ship regards any inanimate object as something to be recycled."

"So the ship is alive?"

"Very much alive."

"And you communicate with it, like you communicate with me."

"I use the same portions of my nervous system to do it. But the ship is not sentient. It is not the same experience."

Revekah felt a wave of exhaustion. "I feel so tired all of a sudden."

"The adjustment takes a great deal of your energy. It is normal to feel fatigued. You are experiencing extreme amounts of stress; mental, emotional, and physical. Would you like to have your support surface horizontal or continue in a reclined position?"

Flat, but please don't bond my arms down." As the surface became horizontal, she asked, "Could you make it a little softer please?" And as the surface became more yielding she laughed, "It's an adjustable mattress." Her voice was foggy and fading into sleep when she asked one last question.

"Do you sleep?"

"No, Revekah, my species does not sleep."

A random thought drifted through her exhausted mind, 'then you don't dream'. But she was too far gone to speak out loud.

His answer was prompt, "Dreams seem to be a human characteristic."

Sleepily she thought, 'get out of my head'.

"Sleep, Revekah."

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Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Please do me the kindness of rating and leaving me feedback. Constructive and/or critical, public or private, raving or troll; I love to hear from you.

To those who leave anonymous feedback, I regret I cannot respond to you individually. Please accept my appreciation in advance.

I would like to acknowledge and thank my editor Dani for all her help. She is a treasure.

xantu

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BigotedeFocaBigotedeFocaabout 1 month ago

Looks like I’m late to the dance again lol. Interesting start

ranec1ranec1almost 3 years ago
Mean As!!

chur m8 awsum story

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
High tech.

Not really much more than something that struck me funny. You are explaining all this wild tech that is powered by imagination and the best you could come up with is a chamber pot. If the ship is going to manufacture this thing and recycle it at least make a regular toilet or something easier to use and sit on. Otherwise it is a unique story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

I feel a little overwhelmed and curious just like Revekah in the story!

EdscribblingsEdscribblingsabout 12 years ago
Still after our Earth women

You’ve managed to make an abduction by a slimy space alien kind of sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I agree with everyone...

It's a "wonderful beginning" to an

"original concept" that is "interesting

& intriguing" and has "caught my

attention" completely. "I love it" !!

..................... 5 stars .....................

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved it

Really enjoyed this story, what a great thought to not worry about anythign, everything recycled and not havig to worry about clothes.

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
Challenging and promising first chapter

A very enjoyable first chapter. The dialogue is really engaging each paragraph drew me further into this tale. Emotional exchange between the two feels like the authentic meeting of different cultures / species. The range of emotional expressions captivated me as soon as the exchange of thoughts and feelings began. The tension was subtle when she enquired as to whether she had a choice. Conceptually the idea of someone resigned and welcoming death facing a new life, in a new body is excellent. Little explorations into human humour make the exchanges believable and rounded. There are elements of your description of the non human being that remind me of some of Octavia Butler’s species in Xenogenesis. I look forward to the rest of this story. Thank you

DragonDreamerDragonDreamerover 15 years ago
Amother wonderful beginning!

I can't wait to read more about this new species and Revekah's experiences during her travels. I'm sure it will continue in your own fabulous manner.

I was truly delighted to see a new story by you on the site - I was missing your writing since Northwest Hunters concluded.

LtirashinLtirashinover 15 years ago
The beginnings of an excellent story!

This has to be one of the more interesting stories I have EVER read....ANYWHERE! There is an incredible element of romance in your work and I look forward to future installments of this story. Perchance, have you read any of Jaid Black's books set in the Trek Mi'Quon universe (starting with the Empress's New Clothes)? Your story reminds me of the delightful romantic undertones in that series. You demonstrate great sensitivity with your words and I strongly encourage you to keep up your WONDERFUL efforts.

XXXXX (kisses)

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