All Comments on 'Starting Over Ch. 01'

by tarkatony

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jimd51jimd51almost 20 years ago
This has possibilities

I like the way the personalities are presented. Neither is really sure what is happening at first, although the daughter is taking the lead. I am really interested in where you go from here and how you get there.

boogieman10469boogieman10469almost 20 years ago
Good start...

I like where this is going...

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