All Comments on 'Starting Over Ch. 04'

Nothing like mixing a lovely gal, a wonderful child and a nice guy together. Of course, there has to problems along the road... Still maybe there is a surprise in here. Well written and five stars for the story.

I'm enjoying your story and look forward to reading the rest. Thankyou for sharing.

Like the whole ball of wax. Good guys, bad guys, friends and relatives.

Too many writers avoid a large cast . They keep the story moving with only four or

five persons total. Making it unrealistic. No siblings only 1or 2 friends, etc.

I enjoy the depth of the plot. What happened to the cousin,Janet ? And will the

Walker family have a bigger part in the story?

I am very

AMerryMan

Good stuff, loving it

Still 5/5

Just rate each chapter a 5 I'm not great at rating each part, I'd rather read than rate and critique.

I may not rate each story but your stories are well written and cover all part of the plot line .LEaveing no parts of the plot dangling.

Excellent story so far however; there's always a however. Never use a weapon you know nothing about, Glocks don't have an external safety or hammer to cock. Still gave it a 5