All Comments on 'Starting Over Pt. 03 Ch. 01'

Great end to to a great story. 5 stars

You sort of threw me with Tom being referred to a Husband instead of ex husband. Also your location headers are confusing, 2 John’s one on Bainbridge Island, one in John’s apartment in Seattle?

I think l’d stick with the strippers myself. They are a lot more fun than fucked up Maggie who appears to not know what she wants at all. She is quite damaged that’s for sure. Why would he want that sort of baggage?

I wouldn’t.

5/5