All Comments on 'State Fair Hypnotist'

Sounds like Dom and Eric might not be under the hypnosis after all XD I really want to read more and what happens next.

As always, very well written with interesting and textured characters. However, the hypnosis kind of thwarted your forte, which is the beautiful descriptions of what the characters are thinking and feeling. With Eric and Dom reduced to robotic automotrons, that element was largely missing. I still have it 5 stars though.

Ch.2 please.

I liked this story a lot, very hot, and so am hesitant to criticize at all, but ... the ending was cliche.

This was awesome. I loved the way you put it together. Please add to this.

The ending.. does it mean the hypnosis wasnt there and they really where into each other and she got conned?

Holy fucking shit...I came at least 5 times reading this. It was so hot and I'm literally drenched. Shit. This is my new fantasy to play with ;)

Super hot!

Five stars very hot

This story was so hot! I'd love the continuing adventures of Dom and Eric being "made" to fuck each other.

I want a sequel!

On a 1 to 10 hetero to homo scale with 10 being totally homo, I'm an 11, but this

girl on girl stuff made me horny as hell. And your metaphors are a hoot. Eiffel Tower?

Cement truck dump chute? Fab! You've got the gift bro.

This is my favorite story on the site. I’ve probably masturbated to it a dozen times! I’m eagerly awaiting your next story but I’d also LOVE to read the continuing adventures of Dom fucking Eric

Such a creative hot lusty story with great descriptions of hot man-on-man sex controlled by the girlfriend. Thank you!

Excellent story, I personally thought it lacked the emotion and nuance of you "neighbor" story, that said expecting every story you write to be of that standard is a big ask. Thanks for sharing

Eric and Dom winking at each other, as if they knew what was going on, not under hypnosis, everything about the story was great, but if i read that ending correctly, story went from 5 stars to 4.

amazing! Erotic fantasies, right? Super hot storyline. I completely loved hearing Kristy's thoughts (and growing horny-ness) as the story unfolded.

Lots of hot sex, as seen through Kristy's eyes. And it was that hotness that was so verrrry enjoyable to read about, regardless of who was fucking whom.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Oh, and I particularly liked the implication that the boys were faking it the whole time. Not that I'm trying to suggest more story or anything, but a another chapter might show the boys on their own, getting it on and talking about how every thing worked out just right.

Love the way she took control of the boys and made them fulfill her every fantasy. The wink at the end, I had a feeling it was going to happen, and loved it. Perfect ending

I've read this story several times and it's still one of my favorites. You should do a sequel. Maybe the three of them do a romantic poly relationship.

A++++ TY

Because of this story, and many more of yours that are just like this, I check your story list every week... We need more! Come out of hibernation, please!

Love it. I came during the Suana portion lol

Freaking INSANE dude, my god. Youre stories.. On point my dude, on, freaking, point,

One of the best stories I’ve ever read! I’m not a multiple cummer usually and I came three times before I finished!

So they are no longer Hypnotised. I liked this story. Would love a part two and we get to see things from the boy’s perspective. Would be kind of interesting if this backfired on the gf though.

I love this! All four of them finally got what they craved down deep. Very very sexy!

Wow. Great story

Great story. I’m not sure if Sara arrived a bit late. It’s great that you added the wink to confirm what in a sense was obvious from the very beginning. The bisex trio was great. If they continue, now that the 2 girls understand each other, the guys can “wake up” and keep enjoying a full foursome. I guess that can be a continuation or another story.

What a weekend that would make. But back to the story I really liked it and especially the wink at

The end

This by far is my fave story here in lierotica. I love watching men have sex and the noises they make as they get right into it, I love the girl on girl too. Perfect story and development I loved it! Thanks for the high! Natural highs are so perfect! ;) thx for making me get there keep up the great story writing.

Great story!! Loved it all and didn't want it to stop. And I loved the ending!! The boys have plausible deniability while living their dream and the girls get the fantasy of their lives. Great story!!

OMG! That was so fucking hot! I would love to read more. I would love to read how the girls made the guys put on a show for them by making them suck each other off, one at a time all while the ladies played with themselves. Or they made each guy eat the other's cum out of one of the girl's pussy. Or how the guy's were told to give the other a nice slow handjob, one at a time.

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Hot story. While reading it, I was thinking about hearing that you can't make someone do something while hypnotized that they wouldn't normally do. Then the last line revealed that the guys weren't really hypnotized at all.

If you actually could hypnotize two straight guys and get them to fuck, they would love it. I think that a straight guy not being into gay sex is mostly a mental thing and, if it were possible to hypnotize them to get them to forget their inhibitions, they would love it. Physically, we are the same as straight guys and who wouldn't love the feeling of a nice hard cock up their butt?

Great story, just wish Dom got fuck by Eric as well.

great story, hard left turn at the end :-) bravo!

I feel like such a freak - I'm the only one who hated the ending.

That was a very hot story. I knew those guys were faking being hypnotized!🤭

The story started off really hot and got even hotter when her boyfriend took it up the ass for the first time. I ended up giving it only a 3/5 because the scene where she is getting dp is kind of middles and hard to visualize and then once the 2nd girl got ntroduced into the story it really made me lose interest unfortunately.

Stupid cliche ending ruins it.

Mmmmmmm good! I knew the boys were faking, which made it even more erotic.