All Comments on 'Stay for Submission Pt. 01'

What Story**

If you are trying to use the name Ish Kabibile, the horn player and comedian of the 30's and 40's whose hair style was copied by Moe Howard of the 3 stooges, you've failed, miserably.

average, never described Karen.

Good start keep going

Whilst emotional blackmail is probably the worst way to start a kink relationship/ agreement the story does have potential as a HEA type of thing. If it was real life I’d be telling her to run for the hills as odds are he’s going to dump her when he gets bored. The way the male protagonist is being portrayed is that at best he’s a selfish prick and at worst an abusive sociopath? There isn’t really enough information to make a decision.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)