by complicatedfaery
Now i gotta go read the next part.....very descriptive....love your use of visuals. - shorty
Very nice teaser. The words were so colorful and imaginative. I can't wait for the story to continue.
Kittn
I hope that you will soon be adding to this story. You have me hooked don't just leave me tangling there. I like the build up and how you left it.