All Comments on 'Staying Close to My Sister Ch. 04'

by FabulousCheese

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I honestly thought you had left for good but glad to see you are doing well. Hope everything works out for ya and can not wait to read even more chapters from you!

KayiterKayiterabout 2 years ago

I'm so glad I followed your profile on the off-chance you would come back.

The story itself is a fantastic continuation of this (like you wrote at the end) over-the-top story and I honestly can't wait for more "Adventures Of Ray".

chiefhalchiefhalabout 2 years ago

Happy to see you back! Keep up the good work, if you need/want somebody to proof it for you, hit me up!

Hellbreaker298Hellbreaker298about 2 years ago

It's great to see you back in action with another part of the series. [Almost thought you quit]

Keep up with the great work.

See you again in 5 years, lol

warm4warm4about 2 years ago

Better not be 5 years for thr next part………

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Man, the original set is one of my go to stories! Having this new chapter makes me so happy.

As silly as it sometimes gets, you still have a knack at making it sound so good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The next part better not be in five years.

I look forward to reading the next chapter.

James_DuncanJames_Duncanalmost 2 years ago

Glad to see your back, here's hoping you write another chapter sooner rather than later

beanburner69beanburner69over 1 year ago

If I have to wait 5 years, I will more than likely be dead. I turned 75 today. I would really like to see how this ends

laughdruidlaughdruidover 1 year ago

I just found this story today and have spent the last 7 hours reading it. I really enjoy this story and look forward to reading more chapters, of course 5 stars.

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I write over-the-top stories. Sorry if you prefer realism. I got a new job so I'm very busy right now, and I basically have not been writing at all. I still plan to finish the series once I feel like it. I write as a hobby so if I don't feel like writing then I don't do it. ...