by drlust
Your writing is sensitive, well paced, understanding of emotion, and erotic. To combine all this into a story that made me want to continue reading is a major accomplishment.
I will now seek out other stories by you. Keep writing....you have a talent not to be wasted.
Outstanding. The character of Mark was what a lot of women dream about, caring, understanding, honest and we can't forget the sexuality of him... incredible. Now, I've gotta go read some of your other stuff
No previous comments- that's a shame...Your story was well written and people should have said so ! Thanks for baring a bit of yourself . Mike .
Although it could've been explored more deeply, this story has every essential component and the steady flow was incredibly easy to read and impossible to discontinue. The narrative character is a rare, rare bird in the world these days, a good guy who knows what he's doing! Really nicely done!