All Comments on 'Steal Your Girl Ch. 04'

I simply loved this part just like all the others you've written! The language and the Genre suit one another perfectly! Infact i was eagerly waiting for a writer to touch this type of story telling! Great job and keep the good work up :)

Great series. Last one would of been better if the girl was straight. Like to hear about a high school/ college cheerleader being turned at a game, or the next door neighbor girl, or the mall sales girl, or the girl on vacation with her family. Etc

Loved the stories...How about we go back in time when you forced yourself on the hottest cheerleader in school.Lots of resistance but in the end she becomes your first conquest of a straight bitchy teen

Liked the whole series,luv to have u write about the girl who resists till she finally gives inn to u after a few meetings.Hope to see u new stories soon.,

Your stories are great. You are one of the MORE interesting writers on this website. Please continue with your excellent story.

your stories are great and I hope you will keep them cuming. more like this is good.

How about a pastors daughtor, or 2 sisters at once, your mom's best friend, your biggest female enemy... anything really, your stories are hot!

Ok, I've read the four chapters posted and have liked each - but the content in this one is my favorite. The writing style is fun and quick, and just interesting.

I know others are posting their wet dream requests, but I would actually like Amelia to meet her Waterloo... The girl she can't just take, the one that resists her long enough to catch her heart.

No one else is mentioning it, so I feel like a downer, but you might have someone do a read through before posting... There are some punctuation and typo type issues: "that that that husbands could beat and rape their wives" - I get what is meant, but it would read easier.

A girl resisting for a while would be great.

Amelia needs to encounter a challenge. It's far too easy for her. She needs to find that straight girl who drives her crazy. Make her work for it. It'll make the straight gir's surrender that much sweeter.

Another great story! So much fun to read! Please continue this!

Why not twins ;)

L

I too would love it if the girl resists at first. Or how about you trick a straight girl to kiss you while she is blindfolded and she doesn't realize she's kissing a girl. Then she finds out that kissing a girl is so much better!

Your stories are awesome and way hot! Please keep up the good work. There's some good suggestions in the comments here. How about mom and daughter? Aunt an/or niece. Maybe even a nun. Then there's always a prom queen/cheerleader. Don't think you've run out of possibilities yet! Love your stories!

I love your stories and your writing style.

If you were to write more stories, I would like to see an example of converting a woman in full view of her boyfriend, fiancee, or husband. Alternatively, it could be fun to see you convert a girl in front of a group of her friend. A bet or contest could also be fun!

Keep up the good work!

I'd love to have you write about a wife whose husband has pestered her for years to try lesbian sex for a bit if fun! Make the seduction go on for several encounters with the wife slowly going from rejection to wondering then secret fantasy then pursuit of the gay girl she met at a night club while away at a work conference!

Love your stories can't wait for more!!!

Flight attendant

All girl catholic college nuns and all

Her nurse

Roommates

Girl crying at bar cause got stood up

Librarian

Cop

Taxi cap driver

Mom in park

Presidents wife

Gets catamaran trip as favor didn't know two other couples were on board

Bar tender

Becomes a sex therapist

Person at sex toy shop

Stock broker/accountant

Census chick

Jahovahs witness hottie

Camping trip neighbors/DNR

Deacons wife/daughter

Massage therapist

That's all the ideas I have for now!

i don't have any suggestions, but as a submissive femme bi girl, this is an incredibly hot series of stories. I don't have any profound thoughts or anything, but *damn*, that was hot.

Hypocrit! How many times have men given women a drink or two to lower their inhibitions. It's not like sge vot the latent lez off-her-feet drunk.

Loved all of these! So great watching the straight girls convert! Maybe do one where she goes to an all girl school and starts convertible girls one by one, pickings them off until they all convert. Or seducing a resistant girl in the shower/locker rooms Fter school. Either way hear are great stories and you need to keep writing them! Best I've read in a long time! Think about your fans please and keep going!!

Love the stories.... and I thought the first one with Danielle was the best. But, and I do like the stories, are these girls really becoming lesbians? After all, they are being fucked by big dicks, Amelia is just strapping on a bit of manhood.... What happens when a big mandingo comes along? Do they go bi-? I mean do any of these girls ever get converted by being fucked by pussy? IE, tribbed... Just a thought

I will go back and review the other 3 entries but I raced through them as they were nice and very entertaining. Hope to see more stories from you.

Please ignore the comment about minor typographical errors. They let us know this came from a human and not a computer.

Read each entry many times; very good work as I stated on story number 1. Good detail and mental perspective from the characters POV. The more shock value the better in views of future story lines. For example, the Stealing the Seat...instead of her jumping back on to the subway car, maybe have you jump off and follow her (and the boyfriend) to another location (office building - having her submit in her office or washroom)? Anyway, more real-time adventures; not the all-girl school scenario as it has been written many times over. Keep it real and intriguing.

Please you should really continue

All 4 chapters were great reads. I'd love to hear the stories of the Checkout Girl and the Soccer Mom.

This is the best read on this site. Please add a story with a girl that fights back, and a dickgirl story.

Just finished reading all four parts.

Brilliant work! Really hot.

Hope to see more.

Would be good if we could read about fucking that Indian girl. Lesbianism is still very taboo there.

All 4 chapters. WOW!!

-Julia

Just not your lifestyle. It is a bitch, isn't it. The one thing you lezzies can't do, impregnate each other. So, I guess we sexually inept, bigoted, homophobic men still have a job, don't we? And if you are lucky, we will let you listen as we make the women moan. God, I love my cock. You are a riot.

Loved reading these wish you were still writing

Loved these, wish you were still around

Hilarious comment made by the guy super insecure about his masculinity lol men are a joke

as a guy, loved whacking it to your stories. its a fantasy of mine to watch a bulldyke who's more manlier than me to seduce my wife and humiliate me.

Is it too late to ask for more?

It could have been a very hot series but, narrated by a narcissistic, arrogant and completely self-absorbed bitch it loses its power to compel.

Do a bully one.

I would very much love to see this series go longer but maybe with a taste of you being dominated by a young butch

Will we ever get to hear about fucking the real estate agent, Indian girl, and soccer mom?

How shocking the one negative comment comes from a male lol wish you'd write more

Loved these stories and the hot sex identified in each mini story. It would have been a great turn on though to see Kate brake the mold and turn the authors head by persuing her by surprising her and several occasions to the point where Kate was able to overpower her with Kate's strong feelings. Thus, having Kate take her as her butch. It's happened before and could if you could worked this thought into a nice storyline.

Definitely have to have her seduce a mother and daughter together — prom queen and her mother together. Maybe get her sister involved too. Open up an entire family’s eyes to girl-on-girl pleasure.

plz write more plz!!!

this is so great work!!!!

great novel!!!

So the marriage is suppose gloss over all the predatory tactics that The Butch character committed. This is hilarious - this behavior is labeled as toxic masculinity when men do it - but if a female acts this way and she's a badass. The manflora philosophy = man haters.

plz comeback!!!! you are a great writer!!!! plz!!!!!!

Sapphics harass women - take advantage of them and its one for the team. Men do it and its a crime against women. If the main character of this story continues will it be - sex under the influence, sex with the threat of violence or something worse.

What grandiose scheme does this character have that will be justified under the guise of (Girl Power).

i really love this novel!!! plz wrtie more great writer!!!!!!!

Fun series overall. I enjoyed the concept of the predatory lesbian and her clear love of the submissive female body. I do prefer a bit more tease and seduction but still a 5 for me.

A series revolving on the idea that No = Seduction

When did this happen?

Ive read all 4 stories. They're really great. How about a story about when she was younger and exploring what she liked etc. Thank you for writing. Don't stop.

Really like the way your girl turns the straight girls into lesbians

First time reading stories of this theme. But they were amazing. You rock. Please make more. Part 4 was my favorite. It would be fun to add a little more humiliation for the boyfriends/husbands. Whatever you do keep up the amazing work.

A great way to get the homophobes to see the light! Great hot Erotica just like your other stories! I can’t wait for her to find me and decide she wants me lol.

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It's a shame it ended here. Need to read about the Korean, the Indian, and the mom. Also, revs to the story for the etc. parts of 1-4 past the initial seduction.

Four chapters of assault disguised as seduction.

Gayle Newland would love this series.

Keep "inspiring"