by Sexykit
Amazing what two minds can work out and combine to create erotica. This story has a little bit of everything with an actual moral undercurrent. Erotica though comes through very strongly, discipline, girl to girl, corporal punishment a little tease of all the elements of BDSM. Grammatically correct the right sprinkling of quotations to get the reader saying in their own mind. Very nice read.
The extraordinary writing skills of Sexykit are what elevates this story.
Harder punishment than I would like to experience but very well written
Wonderful, wonderful story Kit! The two of you are incredibly articulate and evoke all of the emotions inherent in the story. The nettles were the icing on the cake! You didn't spend much time on their feet: perhaps you might consider some harsh punishments there as well in the future? Many congratulations again!