by RedFireBrand
The only thing i might suggest is that the characters were described better ... the descriptions seem a bit vague or maybe shall we say just incomplete i think is a better term... but it is still quite enjoyable as is evident from my binge reading...lol
I will try to get better at that. I have them in my head and sometimes forget to add it in. When the story is done I'm going to go over the whole thing again and fix stuff like that.