All Comments on 'Steampunk Harlots Ch. 19'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 7 years ago
Thanks

So ... can I stow away on board?

Thanks for sharing! 5* Slainté

MarconMarconabout 5 years ago
I love the the story man

The only thing i might suggest is that the characters were described better ... the descriptions seem a bit vague or maybe shall we say just incomplete i think is a better term... but it is still quite enjoyable as is evident from my binge reading...lol

RedFireBrandRedFireBrandabout 5 years agoAuthor
@Marcon

I will try to get better at that. I have them in my head and sometimes forget to add it in. When the story is done I'm going to go over the whole thing again and fix stuff like that.

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All my submissions are being falsely flagged as AI generated so I have been unable to update anything. Nothing I do seems to fix the issue and even if I rewrote everything, I don't know what to change. Finally finished my first story! Steampunk Harlots weighs in at over 390...

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