All Comments on 'Step by Step'

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10towers10towersover 7 years ago
One of the best stories I have ever read.

There are several extraordinary authors on this site, and now you are one of them from my perspective. I'll immediately look for your other contributions. Next will be a peak at your bio. What puzzles me is most bios are basically blank. It seems strange an author can share such intimate feeling, yet generally hide anything personal.

10towers10towersover 7 years ago
Spread legs made this story so real

I don't know it it is visual, psychological or both, but the wider a woman spreads her legs for her man, the more exiliarating it is for her lover. When Yvonne lifted her slightly spread legs from the floor, and widely bared her womanhood with both feet on the couch, that was the ultimate gift and the beginning of carrying the experience to fruition. My wife does not understand how overwhelming the view is. You completely captured the excitement of that part of their encounter. The story had to end the way it did.

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