by Maria_McGeorge
It's so good! I love it! So much story packed into so little space. Ugh, and the SEX!!
5 stars.
I am male, had numerous step-parents, one was just a bit older than me. When they divorced it broke my heart. Several years later our paths crossed. We went to dinner and drinks and having over-indulged she drove me home. We spent 10 days catching up. I went back to my military base. When I left the military she had married another. Other than gender reversal you hit most of my buttons.
Super hot story!
I'd love to read a sequel where he finally notices her growing baby bump and she confesses to being a very naughty girl.
Ok. The last line was the best, he's all mine...gotta love that. so now when do we get to part two and three? this is lust and love at it's best
Please keep writing, you showed the love between two people that needed it.
Very sexy. Well written. Makes me want to see a sequel in which they happily ever after.
It was going well until you got to the butt plug and the anal and then it lost all credibility. Maybe later in their relationship but not then, way too early to be credible.
I really liked this story. I came to the end and thought.....NNNOOOOOO. Would love another chapter or more. Good writing.
I've always wanted to do that to my step daughter, it would have been very enjoyable! Another chapter would be nice!
It starts slow but great. Then when the sex is served you just stepped on it giving it the perfect speed. No nonsense. Raw lust. A fine art in erotic story! Good girl ;)
you could really feel the emotions from the main protagonist, enjoyed the writing a lot, seemed natural all the way till the end. Would love another chapter.
Thank you
Very exciting, very well written, the characters speak and behave as real persons. I don't like much she lying about the pill though, that is not love but possess.
This definitely needs a sequel, a nice 3 chapter series would be great to complete the arch/relationship.
a wales reference suggests the author is not north american...
surprises me to encounter some lazy na expressions like ¨off of¨ instead of ¨off¨.
...always wanted my stepdaughter´s body, ass included, but it never happened...
I was squirting halfway through the first round of them funking! Thank you for your story