by redwolf555
What really makes this story tick compared to other stories is how quick and simple the shift in power took place.
From the get go there was little doubt what kind of downfall would fall upon the adult but the scenes just kept on flowing and weaving itself into the world that you wouldn't care since by the time you start being bored by the characters they had already transformed into their new roles. All in all this was my favorite by redwolf.
This story was nice and to the point. No messing around, the emotion was felt rather explained. I've tried writing like you but can't make it work. It was easy to read, light and airy, full of movement.
pretty interesting, mom was the daughter and daughter was the mom with added people made it good. may not ever read any more but this was good for me.