All Comments on 'Step Father Surprise Ch. 01'

Great first chapter, but I think you got the girls’ names mixed up at the end.

Even if he wanted to, he would never fuck me." Veronica said

I think that should be Mindy said.

Still have it 5 stars

Think you need to re-read it.

"Veronica said ..." goes with the words after it, not those before it.

UAlbanyGirl518, when Mindy was done talking,Veronica said,what about blackmail>

Brilliant. Loved it. Please continue this little "tail"~