All Comments on 'Step in the Right Direction'

PRIMO HOT!

Pretty good story. However, it needs another chapter or two.

Only a rare few could ever come out of it smelling like a rose.

Well done

Only a rare few could ever come out of it smelling like a rose.

Well done

Hot!!! Loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Cheers. Frankie

Oh, Daddy! Hot fun. 5 stars.

good story, maybe one more?

Loved it…every stroke!

This was hot af and also sweet too. You should consider doing another part. Perhaps there isn't enough for a series, but there should definitely be enough for a second instalment

Great. Hot. Sexy. Good descriptive story. More?

Sweet story for both revenge on the cheating wife and coming out better ending up with the daughter

Thanks for writing

Amazing! The long slow lead up to the vivid and very descriptive finale was tremendous. Love the way you tell the story and how I can see as if I am right there. Keep them coming..... until next time!

Sooooo beautiful.

When was the divorce processed though? Did Tracy and John acknowledge she was cheating?

Will there be a part 2?

Oh Damn that was HOT !

I am glad you did the Daddy thing !

My stepdaughter did that to me the first time we gave into the wanting in both of us.

Now she has shortened it to Dad and it still makes me want her.

Sex with my late wife was fantastic for all of the years we were together, But pseudo Incest is best !

Fun story, Thanks for your efforts.

So much scope for how Tracy gets stuffed. Perhaps another chapter?

FIVE STARS

SO HOT!!!

Loved that they fucked in the wife's bed.

Hoping there are many more stories, considering the title.

Don't get her pregnant so they can continue to fuck as often as they want. Hoping Jilly has permanently moved in to take care of "Daddy".

A GREAT story! Please keep writing! A few more chapters to this story would be nice.

John is such a sexy man and obviously gives great pleasure to Jilly. How about some sexy chest hair for John's manly muscled chest? Something extra for Jilly to enjoy as his chest hair brushes against her growing breasts!

Great story and in this new age very believable! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, divorce and a growing new relationship.

Damn good story. Enjoyed reading it

This was a great story deserves a part 2

5 stars. Well written. Personal preference, have Jilly talk dirty more. About how she loves fucking. That she's a dirty little fuck slut.

Have her dress up in slut wear lingerie. Sheer bras, satin garterbelts, sheer stockings with frilly ankle sox and heels that she keeps on while fucking.

Have her take a huge facial as she drinks daddy's cum

I have thousands of pics of my stepdaughter dressed up in sexy lingerie. White, black, blue, lite blue sets. But sadly we've never fucked.

Still hoping.

First 5 star rating I've ever given, well deserved too.

Very HOT!!

Thanks for sharing 👍

Perhaps,, since they are staying together, she should get pregnant. She's a little hot mama; make her a mama!

5 stars!

LOVED it!

I loved it. 5 Stars.

He got hand me down furniture? What a dumbass, The furniture I paid for, would have made the move with me. Why leave the cheating whore with anything? File a lawsuit against the company, and get more $$$!

Absolutely magnificent (as usual)

My ONLY complaint,.. More Please!!

..like mama walking in as screaming babygirl cums all over his cock.

Like it…. Why didn’t mom catch them? Poetic justice for the cheater

paybacks by daughter

Can't wait for next story.

You should have the ex-wife pay him alimony after her promotion, then she'll effectively be paying him to fuck her daughter. ;-)

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It was a hot story, but I feel like this needs a second chapter. He should totally get Jilly pregnant, then you could write an amazing reveal scene, where they tell the ex-wife she's about to be a grandmother. The ex-wife would be absolutely furious that he'd knocked up her daughter, it would be a glorious bit of payback.

Well done! Almost perfect balance of character development, backstory, love, lust, and ultimately hot, horny, well-written sex! Not too short, not too long, although another hot love scene in the morning would have been welcomed too. Love how she starts calling him "Daddy" in the throes of orgasm, and their relationship goes to a new level. 5+ stars! If you consider another chapter, some more anal would be fun, given how Jilly responded to his thumb exploring.

Hot and steamy. Looking forward to reading more about Jilly and his stepfather. Maybe to consider John share his stepdaughter with his friends for 3 or 4 sum. Don't make her pregnant so that she can enjoy continuos fun with her stepdad

I really don’t think it’s right to revenge-cheat on someone with their child. Even if it’s hot, it’s wrong. Part of me is hoping Tracy doesn’t have to pay alimony. He already got her daughter. I think that’s enough payment.…

Great Story!! Loved It!!