All Comments on 'Step Sister Seduction'

The author's profile says he has worked up the nerve to write. Well, this story is a wonderful start! I suggest he continue writing for all our sakes.

Hi I dont think you can end "Step Sister Seduction" here, such a good start to the story YOU must continue it

Ya ever hear of a piss douche? Or a bath in a bathtub filled with pee from both the guy and gal?

good writing ;)keep it up.

That was fantastic, lets hear some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raucous and erotic, you have a vivid imagination that you translated into a readable tale. But from a male viewpoint. Your own fantasy ???

Waiting to see where you go next.

dude when is the sequel

I loved every word of that story, and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter, as well as some totally different stories. if you can create any more stories of this quality I will be sure to read every one.

this story is amazing. please write more. thanks!

I thought that was just frickin' awesome. You must write more!

I too had a step sister that came into my life when I was in my late teens and early 20s. I want to hear more about these two.

I thought that this story was very well written. It encompassed alot of the fantasies that most men have but are reluctant to share. I cant wait until the next chapter comes along.

When is the sequel? My wife and I are ready for the next chapter.

What a wonderful story, keep writing please.

this was a great one I love it alot

That was hot!!!!!

Hotness

man that was hot story good work can't wait to read the other chapters

good but think before you write you can't put shoulder length hair into a ponytail little goofs like this kill a story

the story was good until you added the TIE ME UP AND SPANK ME shit they have a seperate fetish catagory for that stuff so don't put it here.

again a good story ruined by adding BDSM keep it to one catagory. if you want to use BDSM post in that catagory, if you want to write about fetishes use that catagory, they have seperate catagories for a reason USE THEM PROPERLY PLEASE.

I love mixing the genres, the spanking panty ripping tieing up were excellent.

Great story, and If you don't like It well you suck

Really great story. One of the best on this site.

What a great perverted incestual love story, I can't wait to see where the storyline goes. Well written with great characters. 5 stars

Good flow.