All Comments on 'Stepdaddy's Lap'

Very hot!

More please

Very well written, can’t wait for more parts.

This is very hot! Please keep writing. Hayley sounds perfect.

Amazing.

Can’t wait for second chapter

5 Stars. I hope Daddy will fuck Hayley while pulling her satin panties to the side. Maybe while she wears frilly white ankle sox.

Later Hayley should dress up for Daddy. Sheer bra, satin garterbelt, sheer stockings with frilly ankle sox and heels on that she keeps on while fucking.

She should talk dirty about how much she loves fucking. Then begging Daddy to cum on her face. Hayley needs to beg to drink Daddy's cum while taking Daddy's cock.

She already seems like the perfect fuck doll. Daddy's slut forever.

More please.

Please keep this story line going.

Great job, keep up the good work! I loved the teasing..mmmm would love eto read more of your works.

Tenderness is repaid with tenderness. Hayley was shown affection in the formative years so she knows how to give love.

Because Hayley was shown love she is able to give . Truly a tender story of passion. . So many are tempted, so few have the courage.

Lovely story with a certain amount of tenderness. They obviously love each other. Very erotic. I've had similar fantasies of my own step-daughter but would never act upon them. 5 stars. I would read a chapter 2

E here - Oh this one is very nice! I loved how close and tender they were.

E here - Oh my God, you should sooo write more about these two!