All Comments on 'Stepdaughter is Too Hard to Resist'

Good story. I hope the following chapters are better edited. If you'd like a proof reader, please hit me up.

The story line was okay, but the constant switching from first person to third person drove me to distraction.

Write... Wait a day or so then read and correct. Many times I've had to do this process two or three times, but the end product is always better.

Keep writing!

Great start. Mom and son can have a tryst while away, then join the other two for some hot action when they return. Can't wait to read about Mom and Junior!

You need a proofreader. Good start though!

Good first story, few typos but was able to follow the story line .Hope you do mom and son next then a brother sister .A threesome with both mother and daughter with father and son top it off with a free for all foursome where father and son switch back and forth between Mother and sister. Your story was good but get editor or proof reader . Great work can't wait to read more from you. Thanks, gave it a five to keep you going .

same story as "stepdaughters fantasy cums true" same c-cups same ponytail same 8 inch cock same ol same ol no originality and just as poorly written

Things sure move fast in their house. I like daddy and daughter doing it, even if it was a "slam-bam-thank you-mam" kind of thing. I thought she wanted him to diddle her clit, and find out about sex with a real man?

Let us know what mommy and son are up to.

... spend even a single second reading what you actually wrote, as opposed to what you think you wrote??

Yeah, Lexi and Dad can screw each other blind .... what a great relationship and how hot it will become ! His step-daughter can act out all her fantasies and he can too. Some physical details would be great in the next chapter and what Lexi wants him to do more of ? Thank you.

....complete assholes?

Best words in sex. "Fuck me Daddy " and "Cum in me Daddy "

I think it flowed great and builded up lots of anticipation! With that being said, I wish you would've brought more story into the actual sex and spent more time describing it to really get readers off ;)

And i think you should add a little more detail to the actual sex part but i think it was great

Wish my SD did that when she was 18. Or right now, lol!!

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