All Comments on 'Stepdaughters Visit Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Regarding 'Jane and I' rather than 'Me and Jane'

1) You should list the other person(s) first.

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2) It depends on the use. A quick way of checking is to substitute "we" or "us" for the list. If it's "we", use the form "Jane and I". If it's "us", use the form "Jane and me".

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Completely saturated .

This chapter was the best so far. While reading this I was actually able to bring myself to climax just by squeezing my thighs together. I feel like I was just taught an anatomy lesson too. Thanks....please keep writing more of this story.

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Due to ill health as a child meant I missed out on education. One of my worst subjects was English. I've never written anything in my life apart from the odd letter. I don't pretend to be a great writer and can't imagine ever being so. I started writing for my own pleasure and...

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