All Comments on 'Stephanie and Her Friends Ch. 01'

looking forward to ch 2

I could not get past the first few paragraphs, your mixing past and present tense was so annoying.

A phrase like "she's had quite large boobs." - not even sure what it means. are they big now?

At times you switched tenses within a single sentence, such as:

"She had to know what she is doing."

-and-

"and it was pretty obvious that there are no undergarments there."

sloppy, sloppy writing.

and very exciting

Your story got me off. No better complement than that.

Point noted. Will work on it. One of my weaknesse