All Comments on 'Stephanie and Keith's Cuckolding Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Police

Hope this is not another brainless cuckold story where husband is dumb limp dick wimp and wife is slut.

Hope bastard find himself in jail

epic31epic31over 3 years ago
wow

cant wait for a next part, thanks a lot

RassclautRassclautover 3 years ago
Cuckold

Like your story

AEDarrisAEDarrisover 3 years ago
I would like more dialogue

The author of this story is great at creating a scene. S/he is very descriptive. I can easily get a sense of what is going on.

I would like to see a little more dialogue, personally. There is a lot that can be "said" as opposed to described. The paragraphs are very dense, and sometimes less can be more.

Also, I find stories in which the female lead has perhaps an imperfect body to be very sexy. Sexiness is more attitude than looks, and not every woman has a perfect figure and huge breasts. Women who are "human" are sometimes more relatable.

That said, I enjoyed the first chapter very much, and look forward to the next.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A fine rape!

Entirely unbelievable & stupid story, unless related to some 3rd world country - China, Malaysia, Vietnam, Columbia, Brazil, Russia ...

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