by ariyanastories
Hope this is not another brainless cuckold story where husband is dumb limp dick wimp and wife is slut.
Hope bastard find himself in jail
The author of this story is great at creating a scene. S/he is very descriptive. I can easily get a sense of what is going on.
I would like to see a little more dialogue, personally. There is a lot that can be "said" as opposed to described. The paragraphs are very dense, and sometimes less can be more.
Also, I find stories in which the female lead has perhaps an imperfect body to be very sexy. Sexiness is more attitude than looks, and not every woman has a perfect figure and huge breasts. Women who are "human" are sometimes more relatable.
That said, I enjoyed the first chapter very much, and look forward to the next.
A fine rape!
Entirely unbelievable & stupid story, unless related to some 3rd world country - China, Malaysia, Vietnam, Columbia, Brazil, Russia ...