All Comments on 'Stephanie's Amazing Race Pt. 01'

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pokeherkingpokeherkingabout 8 years ago

I really enjoy your writing style and I enjoyed both of your new submissions. Keep it up!

CuriousaboutloveCuriousaboutloveabout 8 years ago
Perfect exhibitionist story

Well done, loved the plot, characterization and writing. A shy reserved woman's discovery of the pleasure of showing off. The idea of a dare and giving control to someone by telling them a secret really work. Maybe the opportunity for many more chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Spelling!

You should find out the difference between it's and its. You are wrong in every case.

What you do is breathe; what you take is a breath.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
This was great!

Fantastic! Can't wait to see what happens next. More excited for next dress off... But I can hardly complain about this!

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Hey everyone, I hope wherever you are in the world, you and your loved ones are safe. I'm a soft-core erotica writer, and always keen to chat with other authors and readers alike. As of Winter 2021 (southern hemisphere - summer for all you northerners :) ), I'm stepping back...