All Comments on 'Stephanie's Grip'

by jacobmerriweather

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
An amazing story.

A great story and beautifully written, I'd love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
On Page One, you convinced me you were an idiot...

How come your main character's name changed from Stephanie to Stefanie in just a few paragraphs? Can't remember your own story? I skipped ahead, way ahead, and voted one star...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The amazing harshness of some anonymous reviewers...

never ceases to amaze me.

You jumped ship on the whole story, which had much going for it, just because of a very trivial spelling change--then took the time to tell us all about it?

I hope you're back on your meds before you leave feedback again.

jacobmerriweatherjacobmerriweatherover 8 years agoAuthor
Thansk :)

My bad about the name change. Little things like that don't get caught by spell check. Also, there were supposed to be longer spaces after the first couple paragraphs in each chapter but literotica's editing kinda cut that out. I might go back, edit, and resubmit, as this certainly isn't the best it could be. And as far as the anonymous dude that didn't finish the story, your loss! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Her hymen didn't 'break' when using an 'industrial size dildo' but did with a penis? Hmm :/

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great kinky sex. Wonderful BSDM!

GingerVyeGingerVyeover 8 years ago
Excellent

I truly enjoyed this story, I'm going to finger my wet little pussy now and cum.

Cyber_BullCyber_Bullover 8 years ago
Absolutely loved it, very kinky!

Readng this is better than watching porn, blew a huge load towards the end- thank you!

Marquis007Marquis007about 7 years ago
Super Hot

A great start to a hot tale. Stephanie is an excellent sub in the making.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
For a change a nice Ds and humil story - not the usual nasty stuff

Liked it that both enjoy their Ds relationship. Mild humil play can be fun too.

Thank you for gifting us with this excellent story.

Best wishes, Simon

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It was erotic and fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stephanies my kind of girl.

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