All Comments on 'Steph's Story Ch. 03'

i stopped at the gay shit if i wanted to read that i would go to that area not be here. and for gods sake use a good editor way to many stupid goofs and missing words.

DBRS

You could say "I don't like gay male action", not "Stop this gay shit." If you're not into it, that's fine, but some other people do like it. These stories aren't just written for straight male readers! Have some manners... you didn't complain when there were lesbian bits.

Anyway, although I wasn't a big fan of the gay male parts, I'm glad you were brave enough to put it in. The whole story flows really well. Nice job!

Great story!!!! Untill the gay shit happened and fucked up everything.... I went limp and stopped reading. If you are gonna put gay male and male stuff in let the readers know at chapter one so we don't waste our fucking time.

Good plot nice detail but u really should proofread

When's the next chapter?

I can't believe that I am the first to comment. OMG. This is really super. I love that it is not 'in your face' sex. It is obvious from the start that they would end up fucking. I would say that as well as 'wank' material there are lots of blokes who are reading this thinking 'why on earth couldn't my sister have been like this' I know I am even though my sister isn't anything as georgeous as Steph sounds. When my sister divorced I asked her if she missed having her clit clicked. she said yes. I said that I could help her out. She freeked. Oh well. Maybe I've been reading these incest stories for so long that I think it is the natural thing and not at all taboo.

the series was a total waste of time between the unrealistic reation to teasing ( he wasn't pissed off i sure would be ) and the addition of the gay shit you ruined another story. do all serious readers a favor and delete the trash and stop writing.

Please can I have the address again of that water hole.

What a fantastic story of sibling lusting.

I did enjoy the tastes of Australian outback, and no I don't mean the arse, so refreshing to hear that tiny turn of phrase.

You poor bugger, attracting so many ANONY-MOUSE. You deserved better than that.

but it all went downhill from there. (1) The plot got way too complicated, and everybody and his dog was fucking and sucking and everything else and the "eros" (which is what "erotic" is supposed to mean!) got mostly lost; (2) Remember that oftentimes "less is more" (and "more is actually less"); (3) Almost all of them dipped into somebody's arse and then without cleaning off dipped into somebody's cunt, which is unsafe (If you knew what kind of germs live in a rectum, and what those germs can do in a vagina...); and (4) I felt the gay and lezzie sex was overdone. The only reason you quit writing was that you had run out of twisted things for them to do!

I practically splattered my screen listening to Steph. recount Tash's story. I've been having a lot of bi fantasies and get really hard thinking of flicking my tongue across the frenulum of hot engorged and dripping cock. I've taken my wife's Rabbit up my ass thanks to a jar of coconut butter and would love a warm pulsating cock up my ass. I'm already hard thinking about it. It would be so hot if Steph. and her brother and Tash and Aaron all got together for a bi orgy. Now I'm going to jack off to this story again.