All Comments on 'Stepmother's Advice-Mine'

Please don’t forget part two that was awesome

Like it ;) More soon I hope

MORE, MORE. PLEASE TELL US WHAT HAPPENED WHEN HIS STEP SISTER JOINED THE FUN.

A good start writer keep learning to make them longer to Read . Just a little more juicy. Thanks

is it real story ?

This story calls for a sequel...or two.

good concept but too damn short...hate one and two page stories

This was great! Please keep going.

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

Good premise.

Sex is nicely told, slow and steady with no rushing.

You need an editor/proofreader. Big time.

You used LAID in bed when you meant LAY.

You wrote: PEAL when you meant PEEL.

You wrote: "The moonlight caught the spaghetti straps of her white top draped over her shoulder." TWO straps, but they only slipped off ONE shoulder?

You don't seem to know what LOLLED means.

More too.

Could have been nicer if she asked him if he liked her breasts? Did he think about them when he masturbated? How often? For how long? What did he imagine them doing to him and him doind to them?

Four stars.

This was so fucking erotic and hot. Made me so hard! Thank you.

5/5 Really well written, especially for a first story? You have an incredible number of followers for a first story..... I'll follow you just for that reason as I feel they must know something I don't.....

Very well written. I loved the hook of the mystery woman at the end. Looking forward to reading the follow up chapter.

More Text please...!!!

Excellent work, clearly you're a writer of some experience. The build up was tremendous and the pay off magnificent. It's Monday morning here in London and I'm starting the day with a smile on my face and a bulge in my pants thanks to this. I may have to allow myself a little extra time off for my lunch break.

Very hot but poor editing. Some of your sentences make no sense and there are numerous typos.

Thank you for sharing your sensual and erotic story. Well written and beautifully described.

Love it…soooo exciting…..mmmmm