All Comments on 'Steps Taken Ch. 01'

Amazing

I can tell this story is about to get really good.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Really liked this story. Some errors noted by others didn't ruin story. Hot. Hope you follow up. I like the direction this is going.

Please keep this story going, very hot.

Really hope the next one comes soon

Does dad get involved too? Does he go away on business? Does he die? These are hard to decide on since all are cliche on this site. I would keep it to one male at a time.

... keep a check on your continuity!

"Dinner will be ready in about 20 minutes." She said. "Your Dad won't be joining us, …"

"Before I knew it my father was home and it was time for dinner."

Did he suddenly change his mind and go home after all?

A very new twist....Please write chapter 2..then 3...My cock is so hard waiting to hear about the next morning!!!

Nice twist.... please keep it cumming.

Have him go to another country or his grave

I love it!!!

I love it!!!

But if Jackie doesn't even come up to his chin, how can she whisper in his ear in the hallway??

Keep up the good yucks and a good story.

What a great story, looks like it is going to be quite an adventure. What a lucky guy, it looks like he just hit the lottery.