All Comments on 'Stepsister's Sleepover Pt. 01'

Not a bad story, but why is it in the incest section?

Looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

YanoSama, to be honest, I'm not sure. I put it in 'erotic coupling' when I submitted it. The mods must have changed it.

If you are going to use an American game say I was kicking back watching football Browns vs. Steelers.... Mom and Dad...

If you wish to talk about Football Clubs say FC or Team name FC.

I wish you well but lost me in the first paragraph.

Sorry, but when it says thast an 18 year is told to go to sleep, I then know the ages have been fudged. Not interested.

Besides to whoever it was I thought browns and steelers were not the actual club name, and FC is term usually used for soccer clubs.

As I lay stretched out on the sofa watching an American football game (Browns v Steelers. Naturally the Browns were losing heavily.) I could hear giggling coming from the bedroom above.

Here is the statement about the "club" lol. Where is any club mentioned. It mentions American footbal. Because the rest of the world calls football what we Americans call soccer. Its obvious that some of you did not read what was there and inserted words you thought should be there. Next time try reading.

Nice first effort. I noticed some run-on sentences and style issues with quotes, but still have you 5 stars. On to chapter 2 now!

Nice story/start.

Mind you, this chapter doesn't belong under incest/taboo.

I'm hoping that the next chapter goes to full-on sex with Jenny and.or his step-sister.

Gave it 5 stars!

Not bad for a first try.

Never, ever force your cock into a woman's mouth.

Enjoyed reading this first chapter. I'm anxious to keep reading and stroking my cock as I read! Will he get to fuck both girls eventually? Incest is so arousing!! I loved fucking my mother-in-law for a number of years!! She was so fucking hot and sexy and loved to be pounded.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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